Precipice

Oct. 1st, 2010 07:57 am
ladymercury_10: (Default)
[personal profile] ladymercury_10
Title: Precipice
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters: Eleven, Amy
Word Count: ~750
Rating: G
Disclaimer: I own no Who, as usual.
Summary:  Amy doesn’t have any idea how dangerous it is, or she wouldn’t do it.
A/N:  [livejournal.com profile] honeynoir  prompted "Precipices."  Beta by [livejournal.com profile] light_frost. Written for the Girl Saves Boy Ficathon at [livejournal.com profile] girlsavesboyfic.  Now has a coda here.

 

Amy doesn’t have any idea how dangerous it is, or she wouldn’t do it. After, the memory of fear will
be so strong it will make her dizzy whenever she thinks of it. But in this moment, all she knows is that
her Doctor is sprawled on a ledge at least six or seven meters down, unmoving, and it’s starting to get
dark.

She has no rope. They hadn’t planned to go down. Amy doesn’t hesitate. She lies down on her belly
and creeps backward to the edge of the cliff, lowering her feet to dig footholds in the cracks. The face
of the cliff has an ever so slight outward slope, and she manages to slink downward for several meters
before a rock gives way under her foot. Fear tenses in her whole body as she realizes she’ll fall to the
ravine below if she misses the ledge; there will be no one to save her. She scrapes down the cliff, clawing
desperately at anything within reach.

She hits the ledge feet-first, thanking whatever guardian angel kept her aim so true. Her knees lock out
and she falls on her back, hair trailing centimeters from the edge, at eye level with the Doctor’s boots.

Oh, thank you. Amy sits up carefully, rubbing her sore ribs and looking him over. His eyes are shut and
one arm is thrown above his head at a funny angle, but his breathing seems steady enough. She knows
better than to move him. She takes his other wrist and unfastens his watch, uses it to keep time while she
checks his pulse. As if his double pulse meant anything to her. She slips his watch back on, satisfied that
his hearts are at least beating.

Amy waits with the Doctor for what feels like hours, grabbing his wrist every five minutes and marking
the increments off in her mind. After exactly thirty-seven minutes, fearful and impatient, she shakes him
lightly. He stirs, eyelids fluttering, and finally manages to squint up at her.

“Doctor!” she exclaims, and he frowns, batting her away with his good hand.

“Pond,” he mumbles, “You mustn’t shout, Pond. I’ve a splitting headache and we’re on the edge of a—
oh, goodness, Amy! You didn’t—oh, you did. What in the name of sanity are you doing down here?”

“I came to get you,” she says simply.

“Do you have any idea what you’ve gotten yourself into, Amy?”

“I have a fair idea.”

“Do you have any plan of how to get back up to the cliff?”

“No, but as someone once said, I have a thing, which is better,” she says a little wickedly.

“Fair enough,” he says, and closes his eyes again.



When he opens his eyes again, it’s so dark Amy can’t read his watch. She has no idea how long they’ve
been stuck on the ledge.

“Doctor, we should really start looking for a way back to the top. Can you get up?”

“I don’t know.” He shifts position, and in the dark, she can just see him wince as he tries to lift his arm.

“Is it broken?”

He grits his teeth and manages to move his shoulder. “It’s out of sorts, yeah. Doesn't seem broken,
though.”

It takes the Doctor several minutes to ease himself into a sitting position, and even on his knees he sways
dangerously. Amy pulls him to his feet and he leans heavily on her arm, backing up to lean against the
cliff face. After a few moments, he takes a long, shuddering breath and pulls himself together.

“Let’s go, then,” he says.

She makes him go first, and they’ve barely managed to crawl a meter before she thinks it was a bad
idea, the two of them in the dark, about to slip and careen into the bottom of the ravine. She doesn’t
say a thing, and they creep onward. They nearly fall at least once; her brain won’t give her an accurate
count for reasons of self-preservation. All she knows is that the scrape of loose rock under his boots, the
roughness of his trousers under her hand as she grasps his leg to keep him from falling, are things she
never wants to hear or feel again.

They stop often, more for his sake than for hers, though she’ll call for a break if she sees him slipping. Day is breaking when they reach the top. Flopping over the edge, they quickly stumble away from it. Giddy with relief, they collapse into a pile, clinging to each other as tightly as they can.

Date: 2010-10-01 01:05 pm (UTC)
eve11: (dw_eleven_amelia)
From: [personal profile] eve11
Oh, I like it, especially your Eleven voice. And how Amy tries to do the right thing and wait but loses patience and shakes him awake.

Date: 2010-10-01 01:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com
Thank you lots!

Date: 2010-10-01 01:34 pm (UTC)
elisi: (Eleven/Amy (foreheads) by meathiel)
From: [personal profile] elisi
Very nice, and the voices are lovely! :)

Date: 2010-10-01 01:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com
:) Thank you!

Date: 2010-10-01 02:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurus-nobilis.livejournal.com
Oh, I really liked it! :)

Date: 2010-10-01 06:58 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-10-01 02:56 pm (UTC)
ext_24600: (who - e/a running towards now)
From: [identity profile] marcasite.livejournal.com
This was lovely! I love your characterizations.

Date: 2010-10-01 06:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com
Thank you! That's always good to hear.

Date: 2010-10-01 03:07 pm (UTC)
promethia_tenk: (Default)
From: [personal profile] promethia_tenk
Oooo, I love your Amy in this. That first sentence is perfect.

Date: 2010-10-01 07:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!

Date: 2010-10-01 04:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sahiya.livejournal.com
Your Eleven is so awesome! You gave me serious shivers with this - I've done just enough climbing to know how bloody dangerous that was, and to know how it feels when you're about to fall. *shudders* Nice work.

Date: 2010-10-01 06:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com
:D Thanks! What lovely compliments. *blushes*

Date: 2010-10-01 05:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tasty-kate.livejournal.com
Oh, love it! <3 Do you think there'll be more to this?

Date: 2010-10-01 07:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com
Thank you! Mmm, I doubt I'll write more to this...I'm not much of the sequel-writing type. What kind of "more" were you thinking of, though?

Date: 2010-10-01 07:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tasty-kate.livejournal.com
...snuggles. HAHAHAHAH

Date: 2010-10-01 07:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com
That is very tempting, actually. *ponders*

Date: 2010-10-01 08:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tasty-kate.livejournal.com
Dooo iiiiit. I love snuggle tyme. <3 <3

Date: 2010-10-01 09:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com
We'll see! If it happens, you will get credit for the idea, haha.

Date: 2010-10-01 07:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honeynoir.livejournal.com
Ooh, love the tone of this... sets the perilous mood perfectly. Amy is so much in character and totally owns this fic, like she should. <3

Love your Eleven too, especially this line: "You mustn’t shout, Pond. I’ve a splitting headache and we’re on the edge of a—
Oh, Eleven, always lecturing... :)

Date: 2010-10-01 08:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com
:) Thank you! Such lovely compliments. I'm grinning.

Date: 2010-10-02 01:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honeynoir.livejournal.com
You totally deserve them! :)

Date: 2010-10-02 01:34 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-10-01 09:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] myconstant.livejournal.com
This is terrific! I love everything about it - particularly that last line. :)

Date: 2010-10-01 09:15 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-10-02 01:06 am (UTC)
ext_1771: Joe Flanigan looking A-Dorable. (Default)
From: [identity profile] monanotlisa.livejournal.com
A literal take on it - very nice; one hopes it's also metaphorical. ;)

Date: 2010-10-02 01:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com
Thank you. Err, what sort of metaphor were you hoping for?

Date: 2010-10-03 07:08 pm (UTC)
ext_1771: Joe Flanigan looking A-Dorable. (amy/eleven face2face - dw)
From: [identity profile] monanotlisa.livejournal.com
As in: jumping off together, falling - in love and elsewhere. ;)

Date: 2010-10-02 04:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] songandsilence.livejournal.com
This is fabulous!! I loved Amy being snarky with the Doctor about the "plan/thing" thing, because it was perfect. And that, of course she would go down after him, even if she didn't know how they would get back out again. Of course! :D

Date: 2010-10-02 12:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com
Thank you muchly! :)

Date: 2010-10-02 06:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] someplacetobe.livejournal.com
You're right in the story: she wouldn't stop to think about it for just those reasons!

Date: 2010-10-02 12:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com
Thank you! That's good to hear!

Date: 2010-10-02 03:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ravenclawreject.livejournal.com
Lovely! I really liked this. :)

Date: 2010-10-02 03:55 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-10-02 10:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lycoris.livejournal.com
Oh, that was really good! Excellently IC for both of them and the end was really sweet. Great fic!

Date: 2010-10-02 11:33 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-10-03 10:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jrsz.livejournal.com
Oh, this is immeasurably lovely. The opening paragraphs were really quite chilling, the first line was fantastic, and the ending was sweet and perfect. The characterisations were so vivid and natural, especially these exchanges which made me smile:

“Pond,” he mumbles, “You mustn’t shout, Pond. I’ve a splitting headache and we’re on the edge of a—
oh, goodness, Amy! You didn’t—oh, you did. What in the name of sanity are you doing down here?”
“I came to get you,” she says simply.


and

“No, but as someone once said, I have a thing, which is better,” she says a little wickedly.
“Fair enough,” he says, and closes his eyes again.


And because this is already long, I'll put in that I really loved this bit: They nearly fall at least once; her brain won’t give her an accurate count for reasons of self-preservation. All she knows is that the scrape of loose rock under his boots, the roughness of his trousers under her hand as she grasps his leg to keep him from falling, are things she never wants to hear or feel again.

Date: 2010-10-03 01:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Date: 2010-10-04 01:56 am (UTC)
clocketpatch: A small, innocent-looking red alarm clock, stuck forever at 10 to 7. (11 The Fez Brigade)
From: [personal profile] clocketpatch
You've made a new fic! I do so love your Eleven voice.

I'm debating with myself whether Eleven was just too out of sorts to figure out that climbing around in the dark = bad idea, or if he was just too impatient to wait for dawn, because he's Eleven.

Date: 2010-10-04 02:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Your icon is adorable, by the way. :)

My pet theory is that he's left the sonic screwdriver up at the top and is anxious to get it back. Plus, going into shock from waiting around in the cold and the dark is less than appealing. :P

Date: 2010-10-05 08:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com
i really liked this

Date: 2010-10-05 08:24 pm (UTC)

Date: 2012-09-07 05:54 am (UTC)
ext_1373932: (Silly →)
From: [identity profile] redjaywrites.livejournal.com
Hooray for Amy saving the day!

Date: 2012-09-07 07:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com
Thank you! :D

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