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ladymercury_10 ([personal profile] ladymercury_10) wrote2010-10-06 08:47 pm
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Tightly Wound

Title: Tightly Wound
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters: Eleven, Amy
Word Count: 465
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I own no Who, as usual.
Summary: Falling off a cliff hurts.
A/N: A coda of sorts to Precipice.  Written for [livejournal.com profile] tasty_kate, who wanted fluff and snuggles. 

 

Amy’s scan is clear, and so is his—they’re both scraped and bruised and feeling rather the worse for wear, but nothing’s broken.  His arm is badly sprained, but considering what they’ve been through, it’s a lucky thing. 

Amy seems to love playing field medic, and he files this away as something else he owes to Rory.  She’s a firecracker, that girl, but she can be surprisingly gentle.  She cups his head with a long-fingered hand, and as she tapes the gauze to his temple, he notices her nails are broken.  But she won’t hear of him trying to help her.

“Sit still, you!  You just fell off a cliff!  What are you gonna do, kiss my bruises and make them better?”   She rolls her eyes, then pats his arm affectionately. 

Which would be a nice gesture, if it weren’t that he’d just sprained it.  He grits his teeth and tries not to imagine what a pitiful figure he cuts. 

Amy’s full of tough love, the kind that punches you in the shoulder to remind you that she cares.  She makes him drink tea that’s too sweet, then drags him to his room and insists he put on his pajamas, right then and there.

Any other day, he’d bluster and protest and generally fumble around, but he can’t manage it after last night.  He unbuttons his trousers and doesn’t bother to mention that she doesn’t bother to turn around. 

 

He doesn’t know he’s fallen asleep until a knock at the door pulls him out of a dream.  He wakes up slowly, feeling each and every bone in his arm, from the throbbing in his shoulder down through his elbow to the bruised small bones of his hand. 

Amy’s standing in the doorway in her white nightdress, clutching her quilt around her.  “Doctor?”  Her voice is unexpectedly timid.  He waves her in and he can see her smile in the dark.  She kneels and rests her chin on the mattress, watching him across the empty side of the bed.

“You owe me this,” she says slowly.  “You’re hurt, and I’m scared, and after the angels you pushed me away and—”

“All right, Amy, all right,” he soothes, nodding.  “You can sleep here tonight.”

She crawls under the covers beside him.  His fingers are numb, but he knows she’s holding his hand.  He’s sure it’s breaking all sorts of boundaries to let her do this, but he’s never cared much for such things.  Besides, his head hurts far too much for him to bother feeling guilty. 

In the morning, he’ll have his bounce back, and she’ll be fronting just as well as him.  But ever after, even when (and oh, thank goodness) Rory returns, she’s never afraid to reach out for his hand. 

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[personal profile] clocketpatch 2010-10-07 02:17 am (UTC)(link)
this made me happy inside.

[identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com 2010-10-07 02:22 am (UTC)(link)
:) Thank you. I'm glad.
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[personal profile] promethia_tenk 2010-10-07 02:34 am (UTC)(link)
Mmmmmm . . . *grabs fic and snuggles it*

[identity profile] tasty-kate.livejournal.com 2010-10-07 02:48 am (UTC)(link)
I think this more or less makes us an official interweb couple. HAHAHA I love you for actually taking me seriously and writing this. My day was pretty good but this made it AWESOME.
Beatifully snuggly and fluffy... siiiiigh. :D This makes tasty-kate a happy-kate. You fulfilled my pathetic prompt wonderfully.

[identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com 2010-10-07 02:55 am (UTC)(link)
Ahahaha, interweb couple! That's fun.

I'm glad you liked it! It was fun to write. :D

[identity profile] sahiya.livejournal.com 2010-10-07 04:13 am (UTC)(link)
D'aaawwwwwwww.

[identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com 2010-10-07 04:14 am (UTC)(link)
:) :) :) :)

[identity profile] countshadows.livejournal.com 2010-10-07 04:24 am (UTC)(link)
This was wonderful :)

[identity profile] songandsilence.livejournal.com 2010-10-07 04:37 am (UTC)(link)
Ohhhhh my god I love this. :DDDD THEY ARE TOO ADORABLE.

Amy’s full of tough love, the kind that punches you in the shoulder to remind you that she cares. And this was perrrrrrfect!

[identity profile] honeynoir.livejournal.com 2010-10-07 08:31 am (UTC)(link)
Aww, loved this from the summary to the last word! Amy’s full of tough love - this is such a good description of her! Brilliant!

[identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com 2010-10-07 01:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you.

[identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com 2010-10-07 01:27 pm (UTC)(link)
:D :D :D Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com 2010-10-07 01:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you muchly! I'm glad you thought it worked.

[identity profile] melignomon.livejournal.com 2010-10-07 05:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, this was completely adorable and so sweet... I think my favorite line is "Amy is full of tough love, the kind that punches you in the shoulder to remind you that she cares." That just rings so true for her, and I love how they're both taking care of each other. Excellent work, please write more. :D

P.S. I realized that I'm like the fifth person to quote that line, which goes to show you've got Amy's character down perfectly. ^_^ I also love how she isn't afraid to hold his hand afterward - once that boundary's broken she doesn't let him put it back up. Like I said, great job!

[identity profile] laurus-nobilis.livejournal.com 2010-10-07 05:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooh, that was beautiful. And, yes, nthing the love for the "tough love" line. :)

[identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com 2010-10-07 05:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

[identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com 2010-10-07 05:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much for all the lovely feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it! It's good to hear that the characterizations rang true.

Write more? What kind of more? :) I'm open to suggestions.

[identity profile] 16littleseconds.livejournal.com 2010-10-07 06:40 pm (UTC)(link)
aww, this was so cute, really enjoyed it :')

[identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com 2010-10-07 07:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

[identity profile] tasty-kate.livejournal.com 2010-10-08 03:20 am (UTC)(link)
...smoochy more? ;)

[identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com 2010-10-08 03:24 am (UTC)(link)
Hahaha, but I don't ship them, not really...

...cue brain starting to write fic on its own....

I DON'T EVEN....

[identity profile] tasty-kate.livejournal.com 2010-10-08 03:30 am (UTC)(link)
DOOO IIIIIIT.

[identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com 2010-10-08 03:37 am (UTC)(link)
This is likely what I will be pondering in stats tomorrow, instead of pondering stats. Hahahahah.

[identity profile] tasty-kate.livejournal.com 2010-10-08 03:40 am (UTC)(link)
Girl, I've been there before...

[identity profile] someplacetobe.livejournal.com 2010-10-08 05:06 am (UTC)(link)
This was very adorable, sweet and cute!

[identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com 2010-10-08 12:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

[identity profile] thette.livejournal.com 2010-10-14 08:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Adorable!

I call the shoulder punch a "bloke hug", because that's what teenage boys do when they need a bit of body contact. (I do it too, especially at work.)

[identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com 2010-10-14 09:03 pm (UTC)(link)
:) Thank you!

[identity profile] tasty-kate.livejournal.com 2011-07-15 03:13 pm (UTC)(link)
*WIBBLE* This was so precious, I loved it. And so them. :D Also:

Amy’s full of tough love, the kind that punches you in the shoulder to remind you that she cares.

[identity profile] tasty-kate.livejournal.com 2011-07-15 03:17 pm (UTC)(link)
(holy crap, did I just comment twice on the same fic?! I thought it sounded familiar... hahaha) AND HOLY SHIT, YOU WROTE IT FOR ME. I'M THE WORST INTERWEB FRIEND EVER.

[identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com 2011-07-15 03:20 pm (UTC)(link)
YOU FOUND THE PERFECT GIF! *hugs you*

[identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com 2011-07-15 03:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee! It's all right! You just get to enjoy it an extra time that way. :D

[identity profile] tasty-kate.livejournal.com 2011-07-15 04:12 pm (UTC)(link)
I did!! :D:D

[identity profile] tasty-kate.livejournal.com 2011-07-15 04:12 pm (UTC)(link)
*hugs you back* Fooorr yyooouu!!

Also, did you get my postcard yet? I sent it off ten days ago and haven't heard from anyone yet if they got theirs...

[identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com 2011-07-15 05:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, I got it! Sorry to leave you hanging, but yes, it was quite fun to get mail from Mallorca. :D

Did you ever figure our how your mailing address over there works?

[identity profile] tasty-kate.livejournal.com 2011-07-15 11:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, goodie! I'm glad you got it.

As for receiving mail over here, I think you could send it to the school but at this point, I'm not sure if I'd get it in time. If you want to send me anything, just send it to my home and I'll get it when I come home. :)

[identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com 2011-07-16 04:50 am (UTC)(link)
Are you coming home soon? It seems like you just got there!

[identity profile] tasty-kate.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 12:11 pm (UTC)(link)
I know!! haha I'm coming home in two weeks-- July 30th. I feel like I'll barley have a free day until then. ~_~

[identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 04:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow! Enjoy your last two weeks in Mallorca!
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[identity profile] redjaywrites.livejournal.com 2012-09-07 05:59 am (UTC)(link)
Absolutely lovely little moment in bed there. Poor Doctor and his lack of social knowledges.

[identity profile] ladymercury-10.livejournal.com 2012-09-07 07:14 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Haha, he is a bit awkward that way, isn't he? Poor Eleventy. :P